I don't even know where to begin.
This write here is way different from the ones you have written in the past. I feel
the sadness, a broken promise, perhaps broken heart. All these factors can turn our feelings in to ice
Excellent write Ole
Add to my fav
5 years ago
by Formidable Muse
"The solid ground has be shaken,
I am sinking into the abyss."
"My winter started when you broke a promise,
That was the day hell froze to ice and the angels fall."
^^ Those two sections are my favorite, I felt a lot of power in them while I was reading.
I liked how the beginning of each stanza showed love and that you cared in a way and the bottom half of each one showed sadness/pain. I think that was very clever.