Comments : Portrait

  • 4 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Frozen memories, framed
    ^^
    I love this last sentence, its true we keep our memories frozen on that event we took a pic of:)

    Good job with this

    • 4 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thank you :)

      ....and Hello wild flower :)

  • 4 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Captivated, whilst attention goes un attained...
    A day to be treasured by many,
    Frozen memories, framed!

    ^Agree, the second stanza is intriguing, well composed and grabs the readers attention. Is it about some memories frozen away in a picture, perhaps of a graduation, a wedding or some important event, that were somehow incomplete = un attainable? I wonder.

    • 4 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      A friends wedding....and yes, the photo in question was left as unfinished business.

      thank you :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Unique little poem. curious as to what the picture is, you leave a bit of mystery for the reader. I suppose it could relate to any occasion really, a special moment that is captured inside a photograph for a memory which will always be there. Nice work.