Comments : Figment

  • 4 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Wooooooooow THIS IS GREAT:)
    You did ittt
    Speechless..

  • 4 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Amazing Xanthe!!
    thanks for sharing the poem dear!
    You've such a gifted talent..how beautifully u have written..your way of writing n ideas used,i loved them all!
    Simply the best!! *_*

  • 4 years ago

    by Decayed

    I could never imagine someone using 'sickle' in a poem. It sounds biological. Here, it added a loooot of meaning, and I kind of found it perfect in its place.

    Way to go, poetess :)

    Amazing ending.

  • 4 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Breath-taking, Xanthe. Missed reading you.

  • 4 years ago

    by Karla

    You exist my dear and your dreamy poetry silences the clocks and my heart.Bravo!

  • 4 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    I can't believe you're 15... I'm sorry. These metaphors are just bigger. Or you're a genius.
    I say the second.

    Re-reading this reminds me why I fell in love with you a while ago.

    Uhummm. Cozy.

  • 4 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I'm speechless.
    No words can ever describe how beautiful and perfect your writing is... you are magnificent and should be published all around the world. I truly mean that.

    I have missed your writing, I'm so glad to read something new from you. :D

  • 4 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Xanthe, yu are an amazing writer and I absolutely adore your poems.

  • 4 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Xantheeeeeeee!!

    It feels like forever since i commented on one of your writes...and im upset because i dont have much to say about this other than JAWDROPPING!!!

    Seriously when i think your writing couldnt get better i see this just perfect....if i could id nominate in a heart beat!