A letter to KEVO

Nice!!!

LOL Rab HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH.

* BTW, this poem is fabulous!!! You're a goddamn talented girl

I can see why Kevin is so impressed
He knows a great poem when he reads it

YOU DO KNOW MY WIFE READS THIS SITE RIGHT?

OOOOOOOOMG! NOURA! PERFECTION! I am astounded once again by your writing abilities.

"I need to know what
you're feeling for me, okay? I
cannot stand waiting so spineless
like a whiny pregno
here."

^^^^^^^^^^^
This made me cry.

"Tell me, do you love me?
Do you shiver when I walk by?
Do you
fl***in' imagine me before sleep
and after breakfast
and during your
lonely tea party where
you sit alone by the
windowsill?"

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This part was surprisingly erotic. I like how you imply that he's thinking about your charms throughout the day, even after breakfast. If you were older, I'd say you should remove the censoring and just go full-on explicit section. But I think that can wait.

However, I would change "walk" to something more special like "strut," "shimmy," or "sashay." These words have more flavour.

"You don't
even like my stuff on FB.
Why the hell am I even tiring
myself?"

^^^^^^^^^^^

OMG SO GOOD! This section brings it back to reality. There's so much emotion. You are the queen of FLOW.