This is really good, I love the rhymes, they were simple yet didn't feel forced...I loved how you described love and heartbreak as a violin, the creativity was really unique.

I love this piece
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This is really sweet and tender. The way you connected love to a violin is simply beautiful. The violin makes the most relaxing music and it gives this love a lot of warmth.

I also like how the violin became dusty yet the notes remained.. as if the memory of this love will never be erased even if the love has ended and the music stopped.

great work! 5/5

I liked the flow and rhyme to this poem, the meaning was quite romantic and I loved how you tied up emotions with music and turned them into a poem, nice work.

I agree with tara
nice written 5/5