I really liked this poem, it really makes one to think. It's amazing how you can imagine and put to words. Great Job. I gave you a five. God Bless. Take a look at my poems... let me know ur thoughts...

Libby

Good work Kristin. The narration was good. IT was a little different from your usual poems. The subject itself. Still the poem is good. Must be because of the story , or words you used.. I am not sure. IT just sounded good and i couldn't stop gving a 5. I didn't feel you forced for rhymes. But i felt you lost track with the flow sometimes. But this is a fantistic work, if you wrote it within 10 minutes. Love, Trincy.

Hey Kristin.
As always, brilliant poetry. You do an excellent job in writing your magnificent poems. I very much appreciate your work. You are extremely talented. Keep up the stunning work and take care!
Kind regards,
Kristina

Thanks to everyone who commented, it's not one of my usual poems, so it's not all that good, but thank you.

Thanks Kristina you are a great poet as well, hope you write something new soon =D

great job Kristin..really enjoyed it..Michelle :)

I am going to add you to my favorites. You are an excellent writer and I would love to read the rest of your poetry and look forward to you posting more. This was so sad....but it's good for young people to read things like this so that the next time they think about drinking and driving they will think twice. I do not even deal with that type of stuff. I can't stand when people drink and drink....it's not fair to the rest of the world. Anyway awesome...

^ Drink and drive is what I meant of course..lol...sorry