Comments : Your Vice White Hands

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Wow this is really good. i love the first two lines. it has a lot emotions. like how you used big words. i dont usually like love poems but this one i like :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Let not the Start, overwhelm you. Where Pleasure is vast, doom is known..

  • 11 years ago

    by Aditya

    It's so good, great job...