Dreamer's Alley

by Baby Rainbow   Nov 14, 2012


I have a dream where I will live
in a future of freedom,
where the past can not haunt me
and will not control my life.

I will live happily ever after
in Dreamers Alley,
where the flowers meet the grass
and grow tall up to the sky.

A place where I escape to
where no pain nor fear exists.
So beautiful and peaceful
full of hope and love.

A dream is what you make it

and I will make mine true.

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  • I love your determination to find happiness in your future even after all you've been through in life. You are a true inspiration. (:

    This almost read like a fairytale. It was light-hearted and hopeful, but not too hopeful. I get the impression that you believe you can be happy again one day, but you know the difficult journey you have until you have completely overcome the pain and that's what's bringing an inkling of false hope, of fear to mind when you are writing this.

    The ending is absolutely remarkable, as it shows your defiance of fate - you WILL make the most of your life, because you are a determined young woman.

    I like to see this positive write come from your mind Saffie. An intriguing title you have chosen also. Well penned.

    Five/five

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I really liked this you gave the same message as
    Me that you should make your dreams come
    True , this reminded me of what a perfect world
    Would be like that sadly , probley won't exist

    Awesome write :)