Rain

by Abbie   Nov 16, 2012


Everywhere the rain is falling,
through the air
brawling
on house and tree
on every little place that you can see
the raindrops go,
what can it be?
that makes the high wide heaven
weep so bitterly.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Great work, Abbie. Your daddy was right: you are indeed gifted:)

    I love how you take a distance and describe the scene as if you were not a part of it..and the question is one I would not have expected from a girl your age.

    Well done, missy!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Abbie- I've read many pieces on rain, but none that lifted my spirits as much as this elegant piece did.. I love your rhyme pattern in the middle and end... it made the poem flow while reading... very pretty!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    A beautiful composition dear.. Its simple yet the last line is thoughtful... Lovely:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    My gods babe you got some talent just pacing around inside you don't you? I wish i could write poems like this, honestly the only kind of poem i seem to be able to write are sad ones. SO you are a gifted young lady.. hope to read more soon

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    So true, even the sky weeps. 5/5