Let me start with the fact that I love how you start each stanza with the title. It gives the effect of... you're starting over with a new idea. I really like that.
And the fact that it is a happy poem... giving praise to yourself [when most people would criticize more] is fantastic. It is nice to see a fellow Raven like this! :)
I like the rhyme and all. Good use of vocab as well.
"I would pen the beauty of life" is my favorite line!
5 years ago
by Tara Kay
Amreen, sweets, I apologise for not reading as much of your writing lately, but on reading this, I vow to read more, because you are beautiful and this piece is so lovely to read, it is a piece of hope and love for yourself, a piece of so much soul and heart...
the flow was flawless, and the rhymes were gentle yet perfect, you are a talent and I;ve always known it, I love your spirit friend, its wonderful, its beautiful, its you