If I could write a letter to me...

by Amreen   Nov 21, 2012


If I could write a letter to me
I would send words of praise
expressing my self-respect and gratitude
in non-verbal ways.

If I could write a letter to me
I would parcel the flowers of bliss
which would enlighten my ambience
and spread the fragrance of smiles
with its kiss.

If I could write a letter to me
I would gift a token of love
which would compliment my journey
and I could enjoy the fantasies of life like a dove.

If I could write a letter to me
I would decorate it with the shades of conviction
which would resurrect my vigour in turmoil
and ribbon me times of relaxation.

If I could write a letter to me
I would pen the beauty of life
which would assist me
in every walk of life.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    I really like this whole stanza

    If I could write a letter to me
    I would pen the beauty of life
    which would assist me
    in every walk of life.

    It is a great thought of giving yourself knowledge of life. I love it!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Kate

    Hi Amreen. :)

    Let me start with the fact that I love how you start each stanza with the title. It gives the effect of... you're starting over with a new idea. I really like that.

    And the fact that it is a happy poem... giving praise to yourself [when most people would criticize more] is fantastic. It is nice to see a fellow Raven like this! :)

    I like the rhyme and all. Good use of vocab as well.

    "I would pen the beauty of life" is my favorite line!

  • 5 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Amreen, sweets, I apologise for not reading as much of your writing lately, but on reading this, I vow to read more, because you are beautiful and this piece is so lovely to read, it is a piece of hope and love for yourself, a piece of so much soul and heart...
    the flow was flawless, and the rhymes were gentle yet perfect, you are a talent and I;ve always known it, I love your spirit friend, its wonderful, its beautiful, its you

    mwah
    xx

    • 5 years ago

      by Amreen

      Awww. Thanks a ton Tara:)
      You need not apologize. I am obliged to receive a comment from you.
      Much appreciated!

  • 5 years ago

    by Adelle

    Very well written I like the concept, a little like a message in a bottle, all the things you wish you could say to your self. It's unusual but I like your style.

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I loved your "Letters to me" this brought to mind a journal written with supernatural rhythm. Thanks for sharing