Comments : Bound To You (Etheree)

  • 4 years ago

    by Khalid

    What a strong message my dear friend! You made my heart freak on excitement. A truly lovable etheree showing how strong should be the relationship between partners. Great attempt.

  • 4 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is such a beautifully written love poem. It doesn't seem to be like a formed poem because it flowed flawlessly making it look not forced at all. Etherees have a distinctive staircase effect structure which is appealing. It turns a well crafted piece to perfection. You really did a job welldone!

    Love is an inexplibable emotion that's overwelming to a degree upon the human senses. It can turn the unforgiven to be forgiven. The evil to a saint. It turns a lot of bad courses into good tidings.
    Love is fun and beautiful if exprienced with that one fated person who'll treat you like you ought to be treated. Let's cherish moments shared with our loved ones as memories will always stay etched in our hearts..

    Love to be loved in return.
    A splendid write and read!

  • 4 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    OMG I love this!! What a lovely etheree <3 it was such a joy to read this, and it was like a breath of fresh air.

    This is such a beautiful form of poetry and what you've written is even more beautiful. I enjoyed it from start to finish!

    I love that you included what inspired you to write this... and I remember this poem by Pablo Neruda (I love him!) <3 It was a nice touch, and made us understand the poem even more.

    Love it! Great job <3

  • Aww, thank you! Glad you liked it. (:

  • 4 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This was seriously strong I love the word
    Choice it pours emotion , flooding the heart

    5/5 awesome piece :)

  • 4 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Love entwined! A love so rare to find but if one does find its Heaven on earth!
    My favourite "That when I fall asleep
    your eyes close."
    Wow! Simply wow!
    Like it!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Well done, Alisha dear:)

    Strong words and strong message, well linked to the words that you used as an inspiration!

    Hope all is well with you,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • Thanks everyone! :)

  • 2 years ago

    by GB

    Beautifully penned. I think Neruda is a great influence to all of us, a remarkable poetry form as well. Keep writing.

  • 2 years ago

    by GB

    Beautifully penned. I think Neruda is a great influence to all of us, a remarkable poetry form as well. Keep writing.

  • 2 years ago

    by GB

    Beautifully penned. I think Neruda is a great influence to all of us, a remarkable poetry form as well. Keep writing.