Comments : My Death

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    The imagery here is perfect. I could actually imagine it all. your poems are great. keep it up. I love reading them. it sucks when things get worse and you feel like there is no way out and nothing you can do to fix it.

  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This poem is so deep and intense. I love it!

  • 10 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I love this poem as well. The rhyming was fantastic and the flow and imagery was great too. I can imagine the water as depression I dont know if uou meant it that way but depression is drowning and traps us with no where to go so I love the metaphor there. I love all your poems as they are relatable to me. 5