The variation of feelings here really resembles the seasons, changing one after the other. Strong love must be durable, un-affected by whatsoever reasons. This is somehow difficult but do exists. Your writing is really heart taking. I loved it.
6 years ago
You have done well incorperating the seasons into your love poem Amreen. I love your poem it is very beautiful.
I wrote a similar piece just like this called seasons, and I know EXACTLY how it feels to have someone be there for a season, a season that you love.. but sadly thats a part of life...people pass by for seasons and if its meant to be it will be, if not we must be thankful for the memories and lessons learned.
Amreen, this was just beautiful, the descriptions, the last line to this...everything about it...just beautiful. A job well done with this one, I can really relate!
Oh yes, love at times changes like the season and leaves us with mixed emotions. I like how
you have associated your feelings for love with nature making it more vivid for the reader to see and feel what you feel...nicely penned!
6 years ago
"Love is flower-like"
It speaks a lot, right?
One of my favourites!
This is such a beautifully written love poem. I really enjoyed reading this from the beginning till the end. It was captivating with elegance and an exquisite serenity.
You exotically described the emotions that love twirls in us like the arrival of seasons every year in, year out.
Spring reflects blossoms of love, that flourishes sublimely without any hinges. It grows and drenches in its tranquility, like the way spring causes a revival of wilting nature.
Winter connotes a freezing moment when all will be preserved by natures subtle presence. As well as hiding the essence of love in its fragile carriage.
Autumn is sure of withering all that burgeons to perfection. It brews a rustle feeling, causing an uncertain amount of diminishing hopes in all in its path.
Fall tends to be the manageble season to me which slowly revives all that is lost coyly. It assures a bumpy but a peaceful way of surviving in its weather.
You really incorporated the apt feelings that can be experienced while in such clime. A beautifully written poem that endears one.
You're really blessed with this art and its my pleasure to always feast on your soul soothing oeuvres.
Keep churning amazing works
You're a superb writer sister
Blessings to you
Yes its true,
Essence of life by vision of seasons,indeed filled with different shade.
Perhaps I can understand How it feels to see the same person unknown with known eyes !
Awh this poem flows sooo beautifuly! heck i couldn't ever write a poem sooo beautiful even if you paid me a thousand bucks in cash in 5 secs! lol i LOVE the second to the last stanza since i love winter but i also get that part since i've had my heart broken but i sincerly think this poem is just beautiful! 5/5