Comments : Seasonal love...

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Amreen.... what a heartfelt write this is.... truly a heart gripping piece!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    The variation of feelings here really resembles the seasons, changing one after the other. Strong love must be durable, un-affected by whatsoever reasons. This is somehow difficult but do exists. Your writing is really heart taking. I loved it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    You have done well incorperating the seasons into your love poem Amreen. I love your poem it is very beautiful.
    XXLostlove~

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I wrote a similar piece just like this called seasons, and I know EXACTLY how it feels to have someone be there for a season, a season that you love.. but sadly thats a part of life...people pass by for seasons and if its meant to be it will be, if not we must be thankful for the memories and lessons learned.

    Amreen, this was just beautiful, the descriptions, the last line to this...everything about it...just beautiful. A job well done with this one, I can really relate!

  • 5 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    I loved how you tie together love with the seasons. I makes it all that much more beautiful. Amazing work hun! Loved it! =)

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Oh yes, love at times changes like the season and leaves us with mixed emotions. I like how
    you have associated your feelings for love with nature making it more vivid for the reader to see and feel what you feel...nicely penned!

  • 5 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    "Love is flower-like"
    It speaks a lot, right?
    Well written.
    One of my favourites!
    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Mohan

    Nice amreen,
    its sad to hear but i enjoyed this..

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is such a beautifully written love poem. I really enjoyed reading this from the beginning till the end. It was captivating with elegance and an exquisite serenity.
    You exotically described the emotions that love twirls in us like the arrival of seasons every year in, year out.

    Spring reflects blossoms of love, that flourishes sublimely without any hinges. It grows and drenches in its tranquility, like the way spring causes a revival of wilting nature.
    Winter connotes a freezing moment when all will be preserved by natures subtle presence. As well as hiding the essence of love in its fragile carriage.
    Autumn is sure of withering all that burgeons to perfection. It brews a rustle feeling, causing an uncertain amount of diminishing hopes in all in its path.
    Fall tends to be the manageble season to me which slowly revives all that is lost coyly. It assures a bumpy but a peaceful way of surviving in its weather.

    You really incorporated the apt feelings that can be experienced while in such clime. A beautifully written poem that endears one.
    You're really blessed with this art and its my pleasure to always feast on your soul soothing oeuvres.
    Keep churning amazing works
    You're a superb writer sister
    Blessings to you

  • 5 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Yes its true,
    Essence of life by vision of seasons,indeed filled with different shade.
    Perhaps I can understand How it feels to see the same person unknown with known eyes !
    Beautifully written....
    Appreciated !!

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Job Amreen. Congradulations!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Poetess

    This makes me sad. I don't know if you wrote this out of personal experience, but it's exactly what I'm feeling right now. This is definitely epic :p

    -Liz

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is beautifully written with outstanding flow and the wonderful imagery of the four seasons as compared to a lover . I really injoyed reding each and every stanza

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I adore the metaphor of the changing seasons of love. It's simply beautiful. The ending is perfect!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by ornella

    This is a beautiful poem I enjoyed it very much

  • 5 years ago

    by Adelle

    A very beautiful poem that tells a sad but lovely story. I enjoyed this very much.

  • 5 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This is amazing! Your metaphors flow together so beautifully and helps make a sad but common tale of broken love original. It's refreshing and familiar, all the same time. Fantastic job!

  • 5 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awh this poem flows sooo beautifuly! heck i couldn't ever write a poem sooo beautiful even if you paid me a thousand bucks in cash in 5 secs! lol i LOVE the second to the last stanza since i love winter but i also get that part since i've had my heart broken but i sincerly think this poem is just beautiful! 5/5

    Queen Ash

  • 5 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I could really connect with this piece. You captured the essence of love that comes strong and quickly and flees just as suddenly. Absolutely beautiful

  • 5 years ago

    by Trouble Child

    Your poem is beautiful, and all of your writings that I have read so far inspire me :)