Comments : Pierce into Darkness (sequel to Darkness Shrouds)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I really liked this pome, great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    Thanks

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I really do like the emotions in this poem not the imagery but the raw emotions in it sorry sweeite the way you used the words are a little off but the emotions make it up! :) 5/5

    Queen Ash