You and I

by Maple Tree   Dec 9, 2012


You completed the sentence
that I longed to finally hear
now it's time to grow old
in the arms of the man
that completes the
other half of me.

You don't have to
spend every day of
the rest of your life
proving to me what
I already know...

Don't cry,
we made it back
from darkness and
fool demons daily,
letting them know,
we are strong,
you and I.

Yeah... we made it...
thank you for loving me
as I love you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is simple and beautiful and the way that love should be.

    You completed the sentence
    that I longed to finally hear
    now it's time to grow old
    in the arms of the man
    that completes the
    other half of me.

    - this is so loving Maple, it is tearful to read beacause it is about a love so true and everlasting, just beautiful. To be completed by someone is a true feeling of soul mates.

    You don't have to
    spend every day of
    the rest of your life
    proving to me what
    I already know...

    - this really touched me, if someone loves you, you feel it, you do not need evidence or gestures every day in order to believe it. Hard as they might try, it is nice to assure them that you already know they love you.

    Don't cry,
    we made it back
    from darkness and
    fool demons daily,
    letting them know,
    we are strong,
    you and I.

    - i love the attitude here, that no one can break you apart and although you may come across obstacles, you will not let them win because together you are stronger.

    Yeah... we made it...
    thank you for loving me
    as I love you.

    - Just beautiful. <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    What else is left to say when its been said before.
    You are AMAZING and this is just another piece with you inbedded in it.

    Xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Awwwwww really sweet poem. I love the ending, how it looks and everythink about it.
    Awesome job^_^