I really loved the message here and animals, for the majority should be left to roam freely in their own domain. Having said that...I was disappointed that there were no animals in a recent circus that visited Perth. I know they are no longer allowed but....it just didn't seem the same as my childhood memories....I loved the elephants for example...huge creatures that could perform so well...had me captivated.

Also....visiting a zoo...I still love that. The animals are looked after and it educates children so...I don't see any real harm there but...I do understand that...in general, they should be free. Nice topic....enjoyed!

Sorry....the site must have updated. In the past, you had to comment on both members in a collab situation...obviously that has changed and this has now turned into a double post....:)

Good msg i like it amreen..

Loved the message. Great collab.

I really love the poem sweetie the way it was not long in each stanza and the simple fact that it was for animals since it's not normally written well that i have seen and the last stanza is my absolute favorite! the collaboration of two great poets shows here in this beautiful piece! :) 5/5

Queen Ash

Very interesting poem. I loved the concluding lines: "As cages are meant for those who are guilty and not for innocent." ...wow such a powerful line!

5/5

This is a very excellent poem. It is the first time that I come across a poem that fights for animals rights. I think its talking about a good purpose that a lot of people neglect.

Awesome piece guys!

I truly love this. I'm a huge animal rights supporter, so I totally agree with everything said.

This is the first poem that I've read that has touched on this topic, it's nice to see something unique and touching with a great message.

The ending is superb and so true. Such a wonderful collab, guys!

I really missed reading and commenting on your poems, you know its just one of those things when one spontaneously goes on break not intentionally. So am back now, *winks*
I love reading nature and animal poems. It just stirs this fulfillment in my heart and makes me exult. That's one of my favorite themes.
Its good to see you wrote a collab with Khalid, how inspiring.

I love how you started the poem by incorporating the archaic teachings; Biblical and Islamic. That gave the poem a degree of magnitude and piousness. And it also tells us how imperative it is to consider the subjects conditions.

You bought to surface about all the travails faced by animals on earth. Subjected to diverse torment because humans have high precedence amongst Gods creations. So man tends to forget we're suppose to be the caretakers of these animals. Due to such carelessness and negligence some have gone extinct and others without coming up with a protection culture that'll sustain and revive their lives, they'll cease to exist.

Providing them with habitable biosphere is a way of curbing the problem not subjected to unfavorable habituation.

I enjoyed reading this and its a breathe of fresh air.
Keep churning great pieces together.
God bless your heart for been empathetic to animals!
:-)