Waiting - My Watchword

by Tina   Dec 14, 2012


Waiting is a hard struggle
That I have involved in
I have faith in "waiting"
So at least when I'm leaving
I hope that "waiting" will be worth doing
In every wish my heart's having in its bottom
In every promise that I have made to my self
I hope they will stand for it
Waiting is my concern
As well as my confidence
Now that you know everything
The time is for you to think
What have you done?
To make me this stupid
Or is this just a magic?
Because it is hard for me to overcome
So if you are a human with senses inside
Come and speak to me
A single word is my requested limit

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this had so much emotion and power running through each word, incredible poem, I loved reading it

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this had so much emotion and power running through each word, incredible poem, I loved reading it

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this had so much emotion and power running through each word, incredible poem, I loved reading it

    • 11 years ago

      by Tina

      Heyy thanks a lot!!! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    This poem is very nicely written. You did really good in expressing your emotions here. The lenght is just right in my opinion, the choice of words, simple, which is what I prefer in poems. All in all very good.

    • 11 years ago

      by Tina

      Thank you very much :)

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