Comments : Little Birdy

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I dont know why this is down rated, I so love it. Its so sincere and it shows how loyal to your friend.
    Great job:)

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank You WF!!! =]

      I'm really humbled you read my poem and more so embedding a commenting :P

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    Aw...this is so sweet and heart touching, your words seem so sincere and warm which are key ingredients in a friendship. I find this piece to be heartwarming and I totally agree with the comment up above this poem is definitely a 5/5.

    Favorite stanza...

    Never have a nightmares,
    If so, its okay
    Call on me, I'll send my flash-light.
    packing and sent it on its way
    Cold outside, rain and snow
    you will be tucked up inside
    all nice and warm.

    Very sweet and heart touching write.

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you very much!!

      And acknowledging I should be a 5/5 makes it even more sentimental towards the poem =p

  • 11 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Wow it's soo sweet and well written really loved it .... it deserve a 5/5 for sure

    Cushioned hair gives you 1000 hugs
    Night's bulb, fireflies and a snowy owl
    stare to believe naturally beautiful
    lives on earth

    a great imagination ...loved the whole poem

    • 11 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you very much!!

      hehe . .. . that is my favourite stanza as well, as the saying goes 'its a page turner' :P

  • 10 years ago

    by L

    Good night to you too!!

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    On another comment:

    " If so, Its okay"

    ^^^ I think "its" should be it's.

    I couldn't spot anything else. I like the ending. I'm not a fan of counting sheep's. ( :D I think sheep is the plural of sheep )

    • 10 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you!

      yeah your right 'it's' ...... hehe I don't think anyone likes counting sheep