WONDERFUL POEM, I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH, GREAT JOB, SO SAD, BROKE MY HEART 100/100

SAME. Magnificent.
Leave me speechless! 5/5

This is a heart wrenching well written poem the only line that threw me was
I would always say forever and ever are love will be
I wondered if the are should be our?

very touching

Sad poem...well written except that u need to work and improve ur punctuations and some grammatical mistakes... Over all...i loved your piece!