Comments : Secrets

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I can see why you placed it in this category but for me it belongs somewhere else. It has a deep sadness in it but also a hint of darkness through out with the mystery between the lines.

    The poem is very powerful and I related to it a lot in parts. The inner feelings and emotions that you have described, perhaps the regret of certain situations, memories, choices.

    Good work

    • 11 years ago

      by Edward Oropeza

      Yes, it is, a choices to be made, a choice that in the end we will be going to embrace forever...to stand still or to remain broken down forever....

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    A very touching poem, it spoke to me right at the core, and I love this poem