Give me your pain

by Aditya   Jan 4, 2013


Give me your pain, let me hold you ever so tight.
Give away the silence, let me love you all thru the night.
Give me your tears, let me decorate a smile on your face.
Give away the loneliness, let me take you far from this place.

Give me your pain, let me Steal tears from your eyes.
Give away the darkness, let me be there with you each sunrise.
Give me your fear, let me make you feel safe and secure.
Give away the sadness, let me love you with a love so pure.

Give me your pain, let me love you in so many way.
Give away the troubles, let me make your life forever okay.
Give me your smile, let me dream of us once again.
Give me your love, let me take away your pain.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Prashant ghimire

    W0nderful. .wht a magical combination words wid love. .

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow I simply I like ur poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow I simply I like ur poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by zombiepikachu

    This is a beautiful and sweet poem.
    A few notes:
    "Thru" should be "through" because the way you have it isn't a real word. It is essentially only used for things like... Drive-thru's.
    In the second stanza, first like "steal" is capitalized. Why? Are we supposed to pay more attention to this one word? I think you can strengthen your poem in this way. It is very melodic, but after a while I was wondering if I had read the same line twice, when I hadn't. Bring emphasis to certain parts of your poem to avoid it.
    But again, as I said, it is melodic. It has a very nice flow, and it feels sweet. Great job! C:

  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Wow this wow i love it its amazing

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