There are a few spelling errors but... this is such a vivid picture... made me a little sick to my stomach because self-harm, to me, is very sad. It hurts to know other people hurt so much the only release is pain.
But I do like the ending. Very optimistic.

I really like this one!!
~Shades of Gray

U poured out ur heart and soul, I know its hard to put this kind of stuff on paper and expect people to understand, outstanding

So much emotion. A clear picture of what's going through your head at that moment. Excellent piece.

Bro, this is so sad, you wrote it perfectly though, and your really described it will, outstanding poem!!! Two thumbs up!