Show him my dear :) hell love it no matter how good it is because it's coming from you :)
It's a gloriously sweet poem girl 5/5

Sweet :)
Visit my poem and my blog please :)
realstoryldr.blogspot.com

They don't know about us. niceyy c:

Aww man ya that guy was an a hole and I'm sure hes sorry and that guy read your bio and is sad that your not ready for a new or resparked relationship :-\

"My life has been spent searching in vain,
Drowning in hurt and living in pain."

you start of on a very strong note, i really like the way this particular poem starts off. theres somehow this dichotomy between drowning and living in the second line that really conveys this feeling of imminent non-lethal suffering that could end in death, with the added torture of continued living. devestating for a love poem.

after that the rhymes get a little iffy, and the flow could use some touch-ups, but the message is clear enough, and your edit at the bottom helps readers to understand the personal nature of the piece. well done.