Wow 5/5 i like the first person view and i love how its like a dream.

Wow, I love when you do first person, it really brings out a new light in your writing. Which is fantastic, wonderful. I really liked hiw it was freelance, and how you used a great style in using "Babe wake up we are here",, the quotations brought more force, and the whole thing was full of extremely powerful emotion! I loved it

I love it ash written very well as always by you

I loved this poem so much!!
My fav stanza is:
Carry me in your sweet white wings,
Let the concerns float away,
So I can hear,
"Babe wake up we are here",

This is really heart taking.
.... nominated

I love this. It is marvelous. I was kinda shocked reading it but I like it. I love how the emotions just flowed through it and how the force was just amazing. I love it mommy. :3 5/5

I like the bit about the story of love repeating itself over the centuries.Its a story that will never change unless we all end up living forever.
I like it luv.

Wow, this poem is amazing I like how you refer to the typical love story and gave the readers insight into the life of the dead. Truly real love awaken us from the dead feelings we may process and heal wounds that we weren't aware exist. This poem is emotional and penned well.

Great poem.

This is amazing:)
Beautiful as it unfolded:)
Keep writing!!

Very good. I love it