This is for sure one of my favorite poems, it is soooo beautiful and the flow is inspirational, great job, I can't wait to read it again :)

This is an amazing poem.
from beginning to end, simply love it...

This is one sad poem... Yeah, I know cause it is a sad poem but what I mean is youve written it with honesty and the sadness is really there. I do wish its a happy one tho.