Comments : No control!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Oh wow. Just wow!!! Very good Hun. Very very good!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryanna

    Thanks so much! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses Bleed

    Very powerful, love it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    This poem is powerful and full of dark details. Truly a hidden side to your personality. I like how the style did not use stanzas it just fits with the mood and the wording is perfect.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I hope you don't mind but I nominated this for this week's poetry conest, this poem is sooooo good, I love the emotions you poured out into it and the heart you described, and eveything

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryanna

    Wow thank u all so much :)