Wow theres no words im just crying. It was Amazing!

Just wow. I know how it is cause I'm a cutter myself. I'm always telling myself just one last time but that never happens. It helps me feel alive. When I cut that let's my heart cry. Rack drop of blood is a tear from my heart. I love it!!! It's one of the best poems I have ever wrote!!!

Sweetheart...... this is such a deep, emotional poem.... and I think you paint a deep picture of red here. Of pain, agony, desire for the pain... it's tragic and so poetic... she'll get better with you around love. When she comes back, she'll be better. :)

It's very sad and touching but i really love the poem,
you are an amazing poet...great job! 5/5

Touching love the poem,

This poem speaks of what many people go through, it seems like cutting becomes a drug that is really hard to quit but it's not impossible. They can do it, I hope your friend is doing better.

I also want to say that you did a good job with the descriptions and showing us reader how your friend feels. Well done.

DANG! absolutely love this. my favorite part is "
I know what my best friend does when no ones around, and I know how life hurts her and how she lets her pain slip away. What she thinks makes it fade, and what traps she sets, thinking it is her escape, if only she knew it is a habit that has taken her away". the whole thing is so deep . I love how you describe everything. I think the part where you said the demon was processing her I think you meant possessing her . this is my favorite one that you've you written so far :) you have a talent :) oh and I entered it for the contest

I read this earlier today, and I read it aloud because it has such power in moving me almost to tears. This sadness goes deeper than I can even imagine....I really hope she's doing better and I'm sorry she is going through this. No one should have to. What really haunted me was how you mentioned the voice pleading "you can't live without me" and the fact that she doesn't have any control anymore. Such a painful write, it didn't need any stanzas or anything. A truly heartbreaking write, you describe so much but make me feel it and you put all the emotion into it too.

Also, thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it!

I used to start reading a cutting poem...then quickly leave it..

But
I realized no matter what type of pain people feel that blade is the ultimate cry. And the depth of pain those people feel is extreme...they need to release the pain inside..SOMEHOW.

She needs release...I do it thru poetry.

this is super sad and I find myself feeling so sorry for this complete stranger. SAD SAD SAD

What a powerful write, very touching

Wow, ur an expert story writer!! Ur amazing dear! This is a great read

This is a great poem.....