I told you

by Kelwin lost in thought   Jan 17, 2013


I told you I loved you
you spited in my face
I told you you ment the world to me
you said nothing
I told you I cared
you told me to kill myself
I told you your amazing
you said you don't care
I told you your the best
you said you hate me

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  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    I really loved it. Its spit in my face and also could you seperate each line and sentence with a period or comma. Rejection hurts and you expressed it perfectly.

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    This is cute to me for some twisted dark sence of humor this reminds me when in the past i never told anyone to die but i do remember someone telling me to die since i seem to have broken his heart... sorry person ANYHOW the poem has a dark sweet bitterish mix in it that it intreges me and has me saying "wow! can't you be any more heartless?" but over all i find it to have a slight error or idk but it seems to need a little more in it for me anyways...4/5

    Queen Ash

  • 11 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I love this. Its powerful and emotional. It flows together nicely and the wording never seems forced dear. 5/5 <3

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    She doesn't know who she was pushing away, she was missing out on the most amazing guy the world has to over, INCREDIBLE POEM

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