Ghosts of my past

by Kelwin lost in thought   Jan 21, 2013


So the ghosts of my past
comes back to haunt me
I saw her for the first time
in a long time
the ghost of my fiancé
she came to me
I wanted to hold her
I wanted to kiss her
I wanted to hold our baby
wanted to ask her why
why did she kill herself
why did she say it was my fault

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  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    A bit blunt, I think, and there's a little tense in the middle part of this poem.. But still, no hidden emotion. Means it's perfectly fine! Nice work, Kelwin!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    OMGoodness, that is soooo sad, so much raw emotional, so much feeling bursting out of it, I love it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awesome poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I like it. But, I think you can do more with it. Develop it more and all. Plus, doing that can also dive into some old feelings and questions which will help get them out. :)

    All in all. It's good.

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