Comments : Rekindle The Beats

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Okay, Meme...Now this is one heck of a piece...

    I love your poetry for the way it is simple yet so effective, you don't overuse metaphors or complex words, but you still manage to pen these pieces of emotion and strength.
    It was beautifully written, romantic yet sad, and just so powerful.

    X

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    O.O...+.+...@.@!!!

    This is beautiful Meme...

    It has a movie imagery to it, your enchanting vocabulary leading to the happy ending. I haven't read love poetry like this for a while... the title got me and the rest of the piece left me smiling, whilst thinking to myself " you go girl" :)

    Into the favourites
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    This poem is a BEAST!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks guys :)

      And Abed, miss ya bro!

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Meme , your such a talent this was beautiful
    Seriously you could melt the artic

    Haha stunning

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Hehe, thanks Tony :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ares

    Brilliant piece and to me it had a good beat to it, which was interesting. (there's not a lot of poems that has a visible beat without being hopelessly cut to size)

    Amazing :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    "I declared a missing piece of me earlier, but I never
    expected to find it right there. So tell me stranger
    what are you doing with my heart tonight?"

    Like seriously, the first part already melt me down from the inside. The feeling of unknown, wondering, and desire (perhaps) in this piece just made this piece sounds unreasonably beautiful. I love this!