I loved the description and the flow was very nicely done, great poem

This rhymes very well. short and tight stanzas help the flow.

Fains should be feigns, but hey that is the only nit (apart from 'i' should be 'I')

This piece is very clever, it could be read as somebody who is indecisive and over analyses everything. Or somebody who suffers from voices.

there are signs of deep depression in this.

A great write.