Comments : May you have good end [Tanka]

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I think this piece needs a bit more work to make the idea clearer..

    but this is what I thought.. I thought you aimed to say that we might be alive and our family could be that who wake us up or we may have died and the angels are waking us...

    I am not too sure.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Has a nice message