Now, Alcatraz Island is in California, right?
I know that much...but I don't get the ideas of this piece, and where it comes from.
Maybe this is history of this place,
or maybe it is personal to you, a place that holds memories that are difficult to remember.
I'm not sure...

but I love the darkness in the few lines here, it stands out...and makes me feel a little creepy by the place...though I hear it is a beautiful island.

x

You are correct Tara :-) Alcatraz is in California.. and I used the island/ Prison years ago, as a metaphor of hidden thoughts for me... it is a very personal piece.. and I chose to make it small but powerful... hugs

I love short pieces with deep meanings, this hold lots between those few lines. But I feel sadness, dark pieces reflect sadness in a different way, maybe a stronger sadness.

This is amazing, great job as always:)

Ooo0o0! This is sweeeettt! Seriously I love the story of Alcatraz and I like that you chose to randomly write about it poetically rather than the biography I normally have read on it!....seriously this is perfection you summed it up.

Love it! Creative! :)