Comments : Winter (acrostic)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Although I complain about the cold, snow, ice, etc., of Winter, it really is a beautiful season. The cold does make us want to hibernate in a warm home, in front of a fireplace or stove for heat. Just to sit by the window to watch the beautiful images it presents to us. Nice work.

  • 11 years ago

    by yogi73

    I love a winter poem, but winter is almost my favorite season. This has vivid imagery and tells a story in a few very well done sentences. Magical!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Meena, this is a treat to read. I love the imagery your words create. I really really loved it. You exposed the beauty of winter and I love winters!
    Well done:)

  • 11 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    A truly magical poem that vividly captures the Wintry scene of delicate snowflakes gently falling. This also has a nice Christmas feel to it. Well done, Meena!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Wow! lovely collections of words.
    this is very cute written.

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Beautiful as always :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww this is so beautiful. I adore it and will add to my favourites. I love how you make this flow so smoothly and the words do not seemed forced as what happens sometimes in the acrostic forms.

    I love the opening line of the winter fairy - it makes it like a childrens story and wants me to rea on more and more. Star shaped love makes me think of the night sky in winter and how it can be so clear some night and the frost around the moon and the stars clearly shining. such a beautiful image.

    nature cuddles - this is very comforting and reminds me of all the little furries going in for their winter sleep until in spring they awaken to tell their tales again and come back to the world.

    Your ending just ends the poem beautifully and it is nice to see a poem about winter that is not a bad or demeaning one but instead shows that it can be a beautiul season.

    Lovely poem. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Winter fairy sprinkles her star shaped love

    How do you get such beautiful images in your mind...this is just so beautiful...loved the complete poem.

    all the best & take care

  • 11 years ago

    by ganjaru

    I love it thanks :]]

  • 11 years ago

    by ganjaru

    I love it thanks :]]

  • 11 years ago

    by ganjaru

    I love it thanks :]]

  • 11 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    Nice short poem describing winter, although if you don't mind a little critique, how about finishing the last line with 'when the world awakes' ?

    That would rhyme better with flakes the last word of the previous line.