Nice work, Ares! I love anything set in the woods, and lyric poems are one of my favorite genres of poetry. The rhythm, combined with the setting really adds to your dark story because the repetition makes the speaker seem more mysterious.

The only thing I'd say is, you're missing the other "o" to the "To" in the third line in the last stanza. I also have a question about the line "I travel all the woods." Since it's not a complete sentence, it thew me off a bit. Did you word it that way, in order to keep your rhythm going? Hope you don't mind my feedback.

I loved the rhyme pattern you used here. It flowed well! Good job

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I think I sang my way through this...
Its got a nice rhythm to it...

I like the usage of woods... As I love forests and wide open spaces...

This made me want to go travelling again :)

Nicely penned