Only one

by Sherwin Talapian   Jan 31, 2013


If i told you these words
oh girl yes i mean it.
to express my feelings
these words would fit in.
and i do believe on what is saying.
that love has destined for those willing.
to have a one or many by picking.
but for me those are not for doing.
to be with you ? no i wont stop dreaming.
and if you tell me yes,that's worth waiting.
that for me no one will ever be called.
my only one and it will never be old.

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this is perfect, pure poetry, wonderful job, I really loved this poem, you really brought out your heart in these words and poured emotion into the lines, NEVER STOP WRITING AND NEVER LEAVE HER!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Sweet and refreshing to know:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    I like this. There's a few errors in punctuation, but it's another sweet poem.

    and if you tell me yes, that's worth waiting.

    ^^I like this line. It gives the poem a patient, calm feel. Very nice!

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Thank you madam... i will make it better for my next poems... your comments will help me a lot :)

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