Comments : Why I do it

  • 11 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    So amazing and powerful love. I loved it 5/5 <3 please stay strong.

  • 11 years ago

    by whoami

    Omfg Kelwin u r amazing! That was the most intense poem I hve ever read...

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    The emotion I sense in this piece is pretty strong. It's not sadness, it's anger, and yet, an accomplishment. I so love how you stayed in one category, that makes you an amazing person, Kelwin.

    And this poem is lovely. Stay strong, hun!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    THIS IS SO SAD, If I wans't in school right now, I would have started crying, you write so beautifully and so emotional, your heart pours completely out into your writing, making the best lines, words, and poems, FANTASTIC POEM, I'm here for ya bro! Please never give up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Miss Lonely Teacher

    I liked this one, powerful and nicely written, keep it up and keep your head up <3