Comments : Look At Me

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its like caught in a web where you want to die or be the predator and take them all with you but our heart does not allow room for it so we live with the pain...I can understand that feeling. Each stanza has vivid imagery that the reader can feel and see the pain...take care.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Some many times we feel that we are being ignored and that no one sees us or the pain that is inside our souls and hearts. We want to shout to the world, I am here, I hurt, I am in pain, See me but cannot find the courage to do so. This was very well written and the message delivered in an understandable way and the reader can feel the emotion and pain in these words. Good job.