Evening walk (Haiku)

by zombiepikachu   Feb 5, 2013


I ride the soft clouds
with evening flames on my breath
home beckons me back

-z

*not good at writing Haiku's. Suggestions?

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  • 10 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I suggest you keep writing Haikus. This one is really good. I love the first line for sure. I love how you decribed clouds. So simple is the word soft but it can go into many things. Excellent write

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