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Wow, this is so WOW, I LOVE IT, wonderful job, wonderful describtion and expression, outstanding poem!
by Ingrid de Klerck
You may not have intended this to be funny, but I found myself chuckle! All of what you say is so true, Marvellous.
How stupid we humans are to always look at the greener grass;)
Welcome to the club, you are a wonderful and promising asset:)
by PETER EDWARDS
Yes, I'm glad too that you joined us Marvellous.
I think we all like your words very much!
Write more, and make our days more pleasant and enriching!
by Bonaventure Onuabuchi
Thats a nice one my brother! I will indeed suggest a different name for it "Message to the disconted"
I wouldn't think of any better title than you've already suggested..well; it's a work in progress.. Thanks, friend.
by anand singh
Another beautiful piece from you.I realy enjoyed reading this and must say, you have a way with words and the meaning behind your writes are awesome.
When you cry for for your worn-out shoe
recall the gem on a wheelchair
ask after him, whose limbs are gone
Then, be sure to count yourself blessed.
Love that stanza.The meaning behind it is so true, but how many thinks this way?
Keep writing bro you are doing a good job.