Comments : Heroes..

  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this is so WOW, I LOVE IT, wonderful job, wonderful describtion and expression, outstanding poem!

  • 4 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    You may not have intended this to be funny, but I found myself chuckle! All of what you say is so true, Marvellous.

    How stupid we humans are to always look at the greener grass;)

    Welcome to the club, you are a wonderful and promising asset:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 4 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Yes, I'm glad too that you joined us Marvellous.
    I think we all like your words very much!
    Write more, and make our days more pleasant and enriching!

  • 4 years ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    Thats a nice one my brother! I will indeed suggest a different name for it "Message to the disconted"

    • 4 years ago

      by Marvellous

      I wouldn't think of any better title than you've already suggested..well; it's a work in progress.. Thanks, friend.

  • 3 years ago

    by anand singh

    Another beautiful piece from you.I realy enjoyed reading this and must say, you have a way with words and the meaning behind your writes are awesome.

    When you cry for for your worn-out shoe
    recall the gem on a wheelchair
    ask after him, whose limbs are gone
    Then, be sure to count yourself blessed.

    Love that stanza.The meaning behind it is so true, but how many thinks this way?
    Keep writing bro you are doing a good job.