I felt, too, this was a tender write. The wonder and curiosity gives off such innocence to the reader and I honestly can't help but smile when you ask "Where are you now?". This write soothes me when reading, and it also reminds me of when we are searching for ourselves, wondering where we will go, where we've come from. The creativity in beginning with "Dear Admiral" and ending with "Sincerely, your final harbor" just warmed my heart....what sincerity. If this person could rest with you and know your heart is home, than that would be all that would matter in life. Wonderful!
Wow!! I love this poem.... so amazing! I can't believe I just saw this... congratulations on the win! It's such an original and creative poem! I love everything about it... First, I love how it's a letter and you address and 'Admiral' .. and your metaphors and similes were simply beautiful.... I was drawn by the entire poem.