Comments : Anchorage

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Meme- I want to scream with excitement... SCREAMS!

    WOW-wow- wow... This piece had me visualizing a woman standing at the base of the ocean, with tears in her eyes, missing her man.. beloved... oh the metaphor was perfect here... it had heartbreak, romance... and an antiquish feeling here... reminds me of the ladies back in the day... when their loves were off at sea, and they went months without a single letter.... Oh be still my heart <3 This is beautiful!

  • 4 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    What the hell

    Where did this come from girl !!!

    Such power and beauty

    Oh I love it .

  • 4 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    What the hell

    Where did this come from girl !!!

    Such power and beauty

    Oh I love it .

  • 4 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Meme...this was soo imagery spoken...I could visualise the whole scene...a couple searching for each other...one on the shore with her hand shielding her eyes from the sun...wondering...
    so beautiful...

    One thing...

    Were are you now?

    -should be "where"...minor typo - error

    this was sooo good :)
    x

  • 4 years ago

    by Meme

    Thanks a lot guys :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh sweet mother of the sea... this is like something out of an historical romance novel... I can picture it all... woman standing on the cliff overlooking the ocean, waves crashing on the shore below, holding the unopened letters, looking out to sea, a lonely tear drop upon her cheek...

    Love this... so much feeling...

  • 4 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very creative write Meme, I love the flow and the innocence of it but wondered why Misc? I felt a romantic tone throughout, or metaphorically a tone of something in life we are longing for but cannot seem to find.

    I enjoyed this very much, well done xx

  • 4 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WHAT THE HELL!

    I'm in love.

    Ohhhh Mizzle, I love this! I mean...

    freaking out, in love with this!!

    BEAUTIFUL..CREATIVE...ugh...Meme, When I can come back to this to properly comment I will, but I'm so stunned right now...Going right into my favorites and a nomination!

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Ohhhhh hon, thanks a lot! I am really glad you enjoyed it :))))

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    Haha, for some odd reason I imagine this letter to be put in a bottle and thrown to the sea... while this lady was in the shore waiting for her love to find the bottle and come to meet her.

    This was really sweet and tender, I fell in love with the final stanza the most.

    5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Mom Pike

    Cute!

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks a lot Momma P :)

  • 4 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow!! I love this poem.... so amazing! I can't believe I just saw this... congratulations on the win! It's such an original and creative poem! I love everything about it... First, I love how it's a letter and you address and 'Admiral' .. and your metaphors and similes were simply beautiful.... I was drawn by the entire poem.

    A beautiful poem! :)

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Hehe, thanks hon :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Milo De Moray

    This is real sweet. I like the way it makes me feel, it has no pretensions, but it promises so much! Thanks for the breath of fresh air meme!

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    [Weekly Contest Comment: 2/11/13]

    I felt, too, this was a tender write. The wonder and curiosity gives off such innocence to the reader and I honestly can't help but smile when you ask "Where are you now?". This write soothes me when reading, and it also reminds me of when we are searching for ourselves, wondering where we will go, where we've come from. The creativity in beginning with "Dear Admiral" and ending with "Sincerely, your final harbor" just warmed my heart....what sincerity. If this person could rest with you and know your heart is home, than that would be all that would matter in life. Wonderful!

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Seeing Momma's "cute" up there makes me cry... She loved this poem Meme, and Jim and I want to thank you for allowing us to have this read for her <3

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      You are both very welcome sweetie
      :*

  • 4 years ago

    by Prasad Ramesh Baadkar

    Dat was a wonderful piece of poetically perfect letter....:)
    gr8 work as always n u come up vid masterpieces matching d expectations of d readers of each n every genre...
    keep it up

    • 4 years ago

      by Meme

      Its been a really long time Karan, nice to see you here again :)