Comments : Greatest Intentions

  • 11 years ago

    by Mom Pike

    Oh sweetheart this is beautiful!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh this is just so sweet, so beautifully penned.
    -sigh-
    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    Simply beautiful, I love the simplicity here, and how convincing and reassuring your words are. I definitely can relate to this poem because often times I question those who truly love me, but when I think of these special individuals my heart swell with joy.

    My favorite stanza...

    You can tickle my heart
    from the greatest distance
    and send smiles across the sky
    for me to catch with my hands.

    Beautifully written.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I simply adore this pen! I can relate so much. I've always been the one to always doubt someones love towards me, it usually takes a while before I truly believe them...and then when I truly do believe them and I get that reassurance all the time, it's truly a wonderful feeling.

    You captured that all so well here. I will definitely be adding this poem to my favorites!