Forever Peace

Amazing piece of writing...I'm so touched by your poem it's like you have given words to my feelings ....

I think these are words that anyone who has lost someone has thought. Shifting perspective to view something like death in a relaxing, if still saddening, light is what literature is all about. This is a great poem that flows nicely. Like all literature, however, it certainly has its place. In your mind and from your pen, you can say "Death is beautiful, tonight I cross into the void", but in reality, there is always more life to be lived and more love to be had. The fact that the poem has made people genuinely worry is a testament to your skill. 5/5

Sweeitie you better not

I agree with Kelwin. Life seems so hard now but then there will be times where you look back and say "thank gosh I made it through". Please, consider the pros and cons here. And if you need help I am here.

Plz not Hun plz!!! Don't do this to me