Comments : Break Away

  • 4 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This reads to me as a couple that may have regrets that a relationship has turned into more than mere hugs and kisses and they are having second thoughts and doubts as to whether it was right or not and perhaps they should stop it and return to just a friendship. Maybe one of the persons feels that the other is responsible for this and has ill feelings for the other because of that. One thing about being the reader is that you can make up stories based on the words you read and they may differ from what the writer intended but this gives lots of different meanings to your work. Well done Jad.

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sounds like love is not taken seriously but just for the sake of having someone, have a good time and when realized that things are getting too serious decides to break off; which in turn truly hurts the other because the other has given his/her all for this love to bloom...its a sad and hurtful situation...take care.