Wallflower

Woah, a very beautifull but sad piece.

I can relate this poem so much because i used to be exactly the same, i felt that this came from me.

I like the use of imagery and metaphors, really felt like i was in the situatuion myself again.

"This wallflower just wants to have a moment
Where she is in the bouquet in the middle of the room
Not for her own glory, but a chance to be with everyone else"

Was my fav stanza and hit me the hardest, everyone just wants that moment if they never get it.

Remember.. be confident and you can do it all!

Overall a very good emmotional piece.
Keep it up, you are a good writer!

5/5 from me =)

Omg this reminded me of me. I love it :D beautiful yet sad poem

Oh wow i love the last stanza i really do love it 5/5

Queen Ashlin

This gives me a really deep insight into the reason behing a state of being shy, and having once been shy I often wonder about other introverts

This is so deep and inspiring poem!! I wished the poem not ending, maybe because of the variety of possible relationships between people and wallflowers for many circumstances. This piece is targetting and insightful. It can be a good invitation for people to respect the nature, especially the flowers as symbols for peace, love, blossoming, spring, etc. I encourage you to write more about such loveable topics which can bring excellent feedback and impact. You are brilliant.