Comments : Wallflower

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    If you ever insult your work to me again, I'll turbo kick your butt.

    There in the corner, where no one notices
    Is someone dying for acceptance
    People Pleaser, Apathetic, Follower
    She's known by many names

    ^This feels like you feel forced into a corner, forgotten. Which, is triggered by paranoia, depression, and anxiety. This stanza made me know this was going to be a great piece. You can always tell by the first stanza.

    This is a sad, relatable poem. I love it. You have massive talent. Keep writing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is an awesome poem. I love the thought behind the poem and the message it shares. The imagery is sad and flow is incredible.
    Keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    This is so deep and inspiring poem!! I wished the poem not ending, maybe because of the variety of possible relationships between people and wallflowers for many circumstances. This piece is targetting and insightful. It can be a good invitation for people to respect the nature, especially the flowers as symbols for peace, love, blossoming, spring, etc. I encourage you to write more about such loveable topics which can bring excellent feedback and impact. You are brilliant.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This gives me a really deep insight into the reason behing a state of being shy, and having once been shy I often wonder about other introverts

  • 11 years ago

    by xXx Eternal PainxXx

    Oh wow i love the last stanza i really do love it 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Omg this reminded me of me. I love it :D beautiful yet sad poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Woah, a very beautifull but sad piece.

    I can relate this poem so much because i used to be exactly the same, i felt that this came from me.

    I like the use of imagery and metaphors, really felt like i was in the situatuion myself again.

    "This wallflower just wants to have a moment
    Where she is in the bouquet in the middle of the room
    Not for her own glory, but a chance to be with everyone else"

    Was my fav stanza and hit me the hardest, everyone just wants that moment if they never get it.

    Remember.. be confident and you can do it all!

    Overall a very good emmotional piece.
    Keep it up, you are a good writer!

    5/5 from me =)