Comments : The one I will always love

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    This is beautiful then completely tragic. I love it.
    I like how you express every aspect of her effect on you but you shouldn't blame yourself in the end.
    It sets apart the poem. Makes it sorta choppy.

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This poem is so AMAZING!! And truly beautiful in each word! It really wiggled inself into my heart and laid eggs, wonderful poem, I truly love it, oustanding job, inspiring, she must ahve really been something and don't blame yourself I don't believe you messed her up, don't blame yourself!!!!