You may consider this a vent but I think it is excellent prose more than a poem. Your words captured my attention and held it until the end. The words expressed feelings and thoughts that many people must have as life "knocks" them down and they get up, again and again. That is the survivor in us. Good job.

I think this poem is an excellent message for all. When we have fallen too many times and just about to give up on life, faith holds out its hand and lifts us up!

This write started off with confidence, then slowly broke down and weakness just to be built up with strength! Loved it!