Please i telling you the truth

by brandi   Feb 19, 2013


I just want to be with you,
baby no one else will do.
I know I say I love you often,
but every word I say is true.
You made me realize
that every boy is not always the same.
I wrote your name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.
I know we have are ups and downs,
but no relationship is perfect.
And by the end of the argument
the confrontation wasn't even worth it.
People try to break us every day,
over and over again.
I don't let it get to me
because I know who has won in the end.
I love your smile,
your intelligence,
and everything you do.
I thank god faithfully
that he sent you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    OMGoodness I love this poem soooo mcuh, fanstastic job it really spoke to me, I loved the emotion, heart, and everything about it, 100/100!

    • 11 years ago

      by brandi

      Thank you so much i just wrote how i feel in you liked it this makes me wanna do more

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Aww. This is adorable.
    I love rhyming poems and this has an amazing flow and the rhyme is good.
    I enjoyed reading about the trials and tribulations the entire relationship.
    Plus, the ending is so sweet.
    So, in all, it paints a bittersweet love.
    Nice one.

    • 11 years ago

      by brandi

      Thank you i don't write poems i just write how i feeling lol thank you